User blog comment:Wingedone100/New 2nd entry:Blun/@comment-2167103-20110528210239

1. Why was he turned into a cyborg? There seems to be no reason for that. 2. You use way too many periods, try some commas. 3. His appearance seems too similar to Cyrax, try and add a few more key detail differences. 4. His second fatality is 'beast' (pun intended).