User blog comment:Noob-zeroorsubsaibot?/My Kreate-a-Kharacter kontest enter:Pyetron/@comment-3982739-20111116224435/@comment-3982739-20111123010435

ch, but I suppose I'll try:

The Bad: Point - The plot doesn't really go anywhere and doesn't have any details. Try to expand on the character's emotions and how he fights or what he does, and make it match with the personality you gave him.

Point 2 - He's.... bland. His attitude is sterotypical of that of a everyday hero you'd see. Add some pa-spazz to him. Give him an interesting backstory or an event that took place in his life to give him a different look on life and what he wants to do and why. At the moment, he's just good to be good, no reason what-so-ever. You can make him a brat to a hero type of character, or something like that.

Point 3 - If I had to chose, of all the MK Characters that's in MK9, would I chose this one? Most likely, no. There's nothing to him that really peaks my interest. Sure, i might use him once in a while, but what good is that? try to add something to him that describes his fighting style, or add something that would tell me the gist of his fighting style.

The Ugly: Point 1 - Your character's bio box (as i call it) says he's allies with Raiden and foes with Shao Kahn. This, honestly, isn't specifying who he allies with and who he;s foes with. Sure, everyone good likes Raiden and despises Kahn, but that's bland and predictable. Maybe you could make him allies with a neutral character (or enemies, your choice). Put others in there, maybe some that you wouldn't expect. Putting Raiden down as allies COULD mean they're allies with Liu Kang and Sonya and so on, but that just limits it. And putting Kahn down is the same problem: Reptile, Sheeva, etc. Specify who he's allies with and who he's foes with so that we are reassured of our suspicions.

Point 2 - From what I read in the describition, he looks like any other samurai, with a little wacky get-up. Nothing special. Nothing noteworthy. It's just plain. Add something that makes him stand out.

That's pretty much what I said in a nut shell.