User blog comment:ElectricMayhem/KAK:Scorpia, The Last of the Shirai Ryu/@comment-4496613-20111106045316

Okay, I'll be honest here. This is quite honestly not too great. You will certainly not win KAK and you should not expect it. I suggest using the time you have left to create a completely new character.

First of all, it's not well-written, the word choice is repetitive and quite frankly not vivid, as I do not have a great image in my mind. I suggest reading some poems by Edgar Allen Poe to see an example of great vocabulary. Second, the name is completely unoriginal, take away the o and the n in Scorpion and add an a. And, the picture is kind of cruddy, as it does not at all look like anyone who would appear in Mortal Kombat. The spelling is really off sometimes, too. You constantly leave out important information to give a great picture to the reader, as it seems to skip around a lot.

Overall, I would give it a 2 out of 10.